I wanted to get some feedback on my blog so far so that I could gain an understanding as to how my blog looks to other people and whether or not it all ties in together. I am going to do two of these peer feedback posts as I want to be able to compare the two and see how my blog has changed over time. I asked two people to give me feedback, Sadie and Will, their feedback will then be used to enhance my blog.
"Your blog looks like it is coming together Brandon and you seem to be doing a fair bit of both research and planning, this is good as without the research you wouldn't know what to plan. I would say to have a look at some of your posts and maybe add a bit more detail into them to give the audience of your blog a better understanding as to why you have carried out some of the research you have done." - Sadie
"From looking through the posts you have submitted so far you can see that you have been busy completing both research and planning blog posts. I think that you may want to have a look at adding in some more blog posts about your trailer and other things such as research and feedback so that you can build your blog up." - Will
I will look at both of these pieces of feedback and change my blog accordingly as the feedback is good and is only going to help me.
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