This is my second set of feedback that I have got from my peers, I have decided to gain some more feedback so that I can see whether or not my blog has improved from the last time I got feedback. Due to this I am going to use the same peers to give feedback on my blog so that they know whether or not it has been improved.
"Taking a second look at your blog later on down the line I can see that you have been adding in more detail to each of your blog posts making them so that the viewer of your blog can get a better understanding of why you are including a piece of research within your blog. This is something that I gave feedback on before. This time round you have done more work on your trailer and more work on your film poster and magazine front cover, all of which I really like, you can see that you have been creative with them all and that you have thought about the general codes and conventions of a film poster and based your work around this. You have been different with your magazine front cover using a specific magazine's theme which works very well." - Sadie
"Your blog is looking much bigger and better from the last time I saw it when it was looking quite dull and vague. You have edited some of your blog posts which makes them a whole lot better in terms of context and relation to your project and you have filled your blog out a lot more which makes your blog look a lot better. You should maybe include some more posts based around your film poster just to make clear why you chose to complete it the way you did" - Will
As you can see, I have updated my blog from the last time I got feedback from my peers and they are impressed with the latest additions to the blog along with some of the old posts that have been updated.
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